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  1. seyed April 8, 2016

    …note: sense of emptiness is more a sense of loss; not vapid… a certain fulfillment has been removed…

  2. seyed April 8, 2016

    …interesting poem…some points of grammar to clean up, but the sense of emptiness is palpable….well-“rhythmed”, for lack if a better term…

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