seyed on April 8, 2016 at 10:17 pm …note: sense of emptiness is more a sense of loss; not vapid… a certain fulfillment has been removed…
seyed on April 8, 2016 at 4:35 pm …interesting poem…some points of grammar to clean up, but the sense of emptiness is palpable….well-“rhythmed”, for lack if a better term…
…note: sense of emptiness is more a sense of loss; not vapid… a certain fulfillment has been removed…
…interesting poem…some points of grammar to clean up, but the sense of emptiness is palpable….well-“rhythmed”, for lack if a better term…